I wrote a Facebook ad that’s spent $238k this month (here’s how)

The most important factor in winning hooks:
Contrast.
This client's webinar performance fell off a cliff in Q4.
But I wrote a new ad in January that's gone viral.
Here's the stats for this one copy angle so far this month:

In case you can’t see the image…
- $238k spent (across all creative variations)
- 6,606 saves
- 4,172 shares
- 743 comments
- 591 sales
- $403.44 CPA
I've never seen saves & shares outpace comments like this on an ad before.
Her front-end offer is $1,497.
I'll let you do the math ;)
Here's why this hook is crushing:
- Opens with a strong declarative statement
- Calls out the rise of AI and ChatGPT
- Positions it as a GOOD thing for her market (freelance writers)
Now, the ad doesn't stop there.
It goes on to make a counterintuitive yet logical case for why.
(super important)
But the hook is what's doing the heavy lifting.
It's allowed us to scale very fast and achieve a record breaking month for the client.
Anyway, I want to do a bit of coaching in 2024…
So I'm looking for 3 people who need 1:1 help with copywriting.
If that sounds like you…
And you're serious about improving…
Then reply to this email with the word 'COPY'
We'll have a chat and see if it makes sense :)
Jim Hamilton
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